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October 25th, 2009, 11:40 am

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Reply Thriller Man, October 25th, 2009, 11:40 am

Daisy's captured by a Wizzrobe and a Moblin... and doesn't looked pleased in the slightest. Can't really blame her, though. :(

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Reply Djoing, October 25th, 2009, 3:40 pm

Meh, the shading would probably be messed up if he started inking.

Reply Thriller Man, October 25th, 2009, 3:40 pm

Thanks for catching that. It wasn't too bad of a fix :D Yeah, I thought about it. To be honest, this comic was only supposed to be something to practice with until I got Photoshop working... that way, I could ink and color comics as well. But this entire comic is going to be in pencil.

The next comic I do for smackjeeves will probably be in color, though.

Reply I-Wanna-be-a-Marysue, October 25th, 2009, 11:37 pm

Inking New reader, adding to conversation!

I think that your comic could benefit from keeping the pencil shading, and inking character outlines, panels, and text over the pencil. (your writing is really neat, BTW) This comic is all grey and white, and would look a lot more dynamic by using a bit of black in addition to the pencil shading.

Reply rainbowcrayon, October 26th, 2009, 2:14 am

I don't think you need to ink the outlines, I think it would be a bit /too/ contrast-y. If you got, like, a really, really black pencil and outlined in that, I think it could add some more depth, without looking awkward.

(Sorry if this is unwanted advice, the comic is GREAT as it is! I draw people a lot, so I just can't help giving advice sometimes, lol)

Reply Thriller Man, October 26th, 2009, 9:48 pm

I understand... lol. Believe it or not, when I started this comic, I wasn't really expecting to put it online at first. My friends actually suggested it after I showed them a few sketches. I don't know if I should change the style right now (well, at least for this particular comic), but maybe later once I get the whole thing done, we'll see what happens.

I appreciate the advice though. Thanks very much. :D

Reply Grey_Wolf_Leader, December 6th, 2009, 10:51 pm

I LOVE your drawing of a Wizzrobe! It's so cool and has a bit of that "Black Mage" look without looking too much like one.

Reply Draconickitty, March 17th, 2010, 12:04 am

daisy is such a badass X)
i loves her

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